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Role Player

The whips song, my silence greets
as it sighs across my skin
Waiting here on my knees
for the touching to begin
I will be your sexual slave
I'll crawl across the floor
Bind my hands, so i can't touch
and make me beg for more

Now the roles will change
and it will be my turn
I will have the power
to show what I have learned
I'll take you to a place
where you will find
I wont be so submissive
I wont be very kind

I'll take you to that limit
where you think that you will break
Then bring you down so slowly
and tease you till you ache
Then your hands I'll tie
and ride you hard and long
Can you feel it taking over
So powerful and so strong



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  • bazoz
    June 6, 2008
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    excellent

    im your biggest fan....keep up the good work


  • craftyangel43
    June 1, 2008

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    An awesome write....so much feeling. i felt as if it were me in the poem, though i don't have a dominate bone in my body..lol. Great job...good luck in the contest.

    Cheryl


    • Deceits Tears silver member
      June 18, 2008
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      Thankyou very much for your lovely comment, please forgive the lateness in my reply

  • Product
    May 29, 2008
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    hell yes!!


  • Galaxy2
    May 23, 2008

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    'waiting here on knees'
    obedient girl
    'for the touching to begin'
    fond of hot things
    'I will be your sexual slave'
    kinky and yet lovely
    'I'll crawl across the floor'
    naked?
    'bind my hands, so I can't touch
    and make you beg for more'
    delicious slave!
    'Now the role will change'
    variety is spice of life
    'it will be my turn'
    ok, honey
    'I will have the power
    to show what I have learned'
    interesting
    'I'll take you to a place
    where you will find
    I won't be so submissive
    I won't be very kind'
    I'm curious to know what place is that
    'I'll take you to that limit
    where you think that you will break'
    my cruel love
    'Then bring you down so slowly
    and tease you till you ache'
    mischievous!
    'Then your hands I'll tie'
    let me surrender to you
    'and ride you hard and long'
    oh my...when will you do that?

    Fascinating erotica, cutie!
    Kisses all over!

    Galaxy2


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    May 22, 2008
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    Yikes.

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