Hammered,
beneath hell's silence,
guilt,
bleeds screaming tantrums,
ripping,
reality's flesh away,
tipping,
insanity's balance beyond,
mime,
signs devil's contract
Author notes
Prompt: Picture Prompt 20 words more or less
Image ~ Hidden Anger by ~bugdown
A contest entry
- Dark Quickie 10*20 by Unsigned.
450 points, ended May 22, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Holy heck that picture is scary and your write is perfect for it! Glad to see a Gold shiny on this!
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Congrats on your well deserved Gold!!
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Yeah. Congratulations on your Gold! Simon saw your immense talent!
Shana -
Wonderful
Loved the last line it brought the whole thing to such a marvelous conclusion...
Well done poet
Simon
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What an absolutely wonderful write on this prompt. Dark and so well done. All the best to you!
Linda
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Dark to the nth degree! I think we saw similar pain in the given prompt. GUILT, the main cause of insanity is penned with imagery of the dark zone. Best wishes. Excellent! Just added you to fav's.
Shana
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This is so wonderfully dark and angry. The thought of screaming tantrums struck me with such force. So many powerful emotions.
Best wishes in the contest.
Love Margaret
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