Changing faces, playing games
Shattered barriers,
Holding me in
True emotion roaring, screaming
Breaking down the boundaries buried deep within
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- Dark Quickie 10*20 by Unsigned.
450 points, ended May 22, 2008, 9 entries
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A talented poet takes a tiny amount of words and makes them into a thing of beauty whether it be a bright beautiful or a dark and you Ms. Sammi did just that! Amazing write for such a small amount of words needed...well done can't wait to keep reading more. Peace n' Love, JT
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Like what you have said in such a short space, well written.
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This is great I love the metaphor used...
I also saw it similar....sort of the inner mental pieces trying to escape...
Well done poet...
Simon
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This write is as if you are exploding from within! I can feel the evil bursting through the self imposed barriers, as you fight to free yourself. Best wishes in this contest!
Shana
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A very visual and frightening take on the prompt. Beautiful flow and use of emotion and movement. An enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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