Her face looks down
Her body lay with silver
Barely held in the air
Mystifying
That can only describe it.
And if only I could reach
That magnificent beauty
The shining ray of hope
Maybe it wouldn’t darken
With the light
With her only light
Shedding away is her light
And all I can do
Is stare up at her
As she stares down at me.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired again by whispernthedark.
400 points, ended June 10, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Probably sucks huh? ^_^
Comments
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beautiful, I really like this one, I think it's my favorite! XD
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Amazing.
"Shedding away is her light
And all I can do is stare up at her,
As she stares down at me."
I love it, seriously.
Best of luck, my friend
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Great inspiration from the picture. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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