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Reserved Words



I may not be deserving of the patience,
but I feel that with the time,
I can manifest something decent,
least of all worthwhile.
Allow for me to scribe for you,
and see what turns up next.
I guarentee that if you *wait for me,**
it will be more than you'd expect...







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I may not make it back by the closing date, but if you wait for me to complete my entry, I shall --pleads--

I am a member of the Gluttons for Punishment.
Alas, the group seems to be sliding downhill, so uneventful these days. Corrupts departure has been a low and uncomfortable blow... however, I have good faith that it will recuperate. In fact, if you are the new Head, it should be thriving again in no time

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 23, 2008
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    Now there is a lovely promise. More than you expect. How often does that happen these days?


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    Love it and thankyou !

    cleverly done how can I resist a poetic plea for
    patience....as I have been so blessed with patience
    from many, many, many!
    (blush-blush-blush)