True Love...
This feeling or emotion,
However you define it,
Is a force...
But a force that attracts.
however,
If love repels,
Then it dies
And never was real.
Love therefore,
Is either magical...
Like living a fairy tale
or
Love becomes a dark prison.
To experience it,
One just has to believe in it!
I can't make you feel it
For it just happens
but
If you want others to feel it,
Act as if...
Show your feeling of love to them
And it can change
Back form rust to gold.
for
Hidden feelings left unexpressed
Destroy love.
Even small words...
Thank you for...
I love you...
and
Let me in your heart again...
Open once closed doors
To re-experience the lost romance
Of what was once a fire..,
With flames of passion and desire.
Define love...
Then look for it.
And BELEIVE in it!
It can resurface.
Its a river of desire.
Tame it and it will grow eternally!
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- Where Is The Love? by Little Lottie.
750 points, ended June 1, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
botoh
Comments
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This is a wonderful piece. It is unique in its structure but it makes for a beautiful write. Comparing love to a river... I would have never thought about it but it does make sense. Rivers are wild, they can flood, they bring life when bountiful, but can stricken a land with disease, much like love can when it is present and what it does to you after you have lost it. Thank you
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that had many metaphors and truths about love that many of us fail to recognize everyday. we shouldnt forget those lil things like saying thank you or i love you make someones day.
"Hidden feelings left unexpressed
Destroy love." ---that had so much wisdom, just stated it out plainly. well done(:
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