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Summer

The summer breeze blows.
The air is filled with moisture.
I smell the flowers.

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I had to write a haiku for my English 3 class at school, and this is what I came up with.

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  • RadioPJ
    May 22, 2008

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    This is perfect, and accurately alludes to the humidity of summer, then slows us down to smell the flowers. Nice! It sums up a good feeling to have. (Can I borrow it? ... the feeling that is

    • SecretMe15
      June 3, 2008
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      Yes. We should all feel like this in the summer time. At peace and relaxed. Thanks for the comment!