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Mystery

My eyes wonder,
my mind is going on vacation,
My heart speeds up,
my hands twitch.

As my mind returns,
your face appears,
those peircing eyes,
those suculent lips,
those beautiful,
suculent,
lips.

As Pink as a rose,
and sweet as candy,
the thought if those lips,
make my mind go crazy,
your soft warmth upon mine.

The hands of a man,
so strong,
so soft,
the feel of his hands,
upon my back,
sends shivers down my spine.

His chest,
so solid,
so warm,
i lay my head,
and rest my eyes,
knowing,
i am safe.

Mystery is his name,
Beauty is his game.
His beauty is radient,
as bright as the sun.

As cute as a mouse,
as sweet as ice cream,
as polite as a child.

Mystery is his name,
my love,
Mystery

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  • Theory Of The Lost
    June 7, 2008
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    Hey could you put what you want to be in your author comment box please and thanks!!

  • wendymolly
    June 5, 2008

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    I had to read through a few times, every stanza, so well felt, your thoughts beg to be read!!! and so it is with that alone that you are a finalist in the contest!!!! Take Care,
    ~pithyAplomb.


  • jocelynclaire
    June 4, 2008
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    Interesting read, thanks for entering!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    May 31, 2008

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    This is great! Thanks so much
    for taking the time to write for
    this contest. I appreciate it and
    wish you the best of luck with it
    here!




    Jeremy0826


  • daviscth silver member
    May 30, 2008

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    I really enjoyed reading this!! The imagery you projected into your piece is wonderfully done. Thanks for posting.

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