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"All Choked Up"

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Mommy knows I'm sorry;
My Doggie knows it too!
Doggie, I'm so sorry
I gave my doll to you!

I thought that you were hungry
and needed to be fed.
Doggie, I'm so sorry
you choked on Dollie's head!

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Picture: "Special Pleading" by Charles Burton Barber
A contest entry for:
PIF/10/40
by AliceinPoetryLand (39 words used)

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  • amysticwriter silver member
    May 27, 2008
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    You put me inside the picture...love it...


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 26, 2008
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    Wonderful write indeed. Thanks so much for your entry.
    Gaylene


  • Pearl-1
    May 23, 2008
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    dogs nearly always get the blame from the little uns..brill write..good luck in the contest..xxx


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 23, 2008

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    Aww... precious!! That is so cute and adorable hun... perfect for the pic!!


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    LOL Poor pooch. Again, your wit and humor are right on target! All the best to you!

    Linda

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