Words like bullets
Burying deep
Into the flesh
Of minds so weak
Author notes
Its short...the third line used to be "In the soft flesh" which ones betta that one or this one?
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Short & simple, but ever so true.
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SIMPLY FANTABYHOOBY!!
hey whats happening have fun at skool today? im bored as hell lol and our not on msn so im wrighting this yepp cool poem hey -
Beautiful.......
powerful and these words i will remember.
you took how every lost soul feels and put it in few words.....
thats what makes it so beautiful.
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this is good. i like it its got a good meaning
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Short and to the point
nice work
i like it
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I LOVE this. Exteremly powerful and I relate to it so well.
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Good poetry
Love this very powerful statement
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