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From the day
I did fall in love with you
I ne’er had doubts about
choosing to be with you,
as my one and only Love
as the Angel o’ my fantasies
as my soul mate

You came into my life
to brighten up my dark days,
to warm up my cold, windy days
for that; the love I feel for you
burns inside of me like the volcano,
so strong, firm, untainted and endless

I love you my King
for keeping me moving on,
as your love makes me stronger
each and everyday of my living

Your love quenches my thirst
and your smile; music to my soul
while your touch is the sweet melody
that plays a divine tune as you calm my senses

I do adore you my King

As a ship carries people to lands afar,
none but Yah knows whether it will reach
its destination or not, but the people take chances
as they want to be where they want to be_
they may take a few weeks, even months to
complete their voyage depending on how far they are going
but ours; with Yah’s eternal guidance and unconditional love will stand firm, always

From the day
I did fall in love with you,
I ne’er had doubts about
choosing o be with you,
as my one and only Love,
as the angel o’ my fantasies
as my soul mate….

Poem by: © Zimbini Qaba, All rights reserved
Date: 26 February 2008

A poem my girlfriend wrote for me...Tell me what you think about it, I will highly appreciate your comments...Shalom

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  • Freestyle Bushido
    May 29, 2008

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    I thought this was excellent writing. The form and presentation was well crafted. The imagery really built itself in readers mind eye. I can't see why your girlfriend wouldn't like this. Excellent poem


  • Mind Constructor
    May 26, 2008
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    yho! mtakwethu liyakuthanda eliqhiyazana.