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Ash

I can't tell you how I feel.
Just  that she is the the colour staining the sepia toned life inside my frame.

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For my beautiful Ashlii.

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  • Little Lottie
    May 24, 2008

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    It is sweet and simple. And your last line reminds me of a photograph, of watching the negatives become a beautiful work of art as the colors seep in.


  • PatheticKt
    May 22, 2008

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    Ahh, such a wonderful line the last sentence is
    I guess when we have a lover, they will always bring colors to our lives ^^