I stare at my reflection
Reflected with pure gold
I wish everyone I had known could see it
So they would never act so cold
Popularity is well below my figure
My enemies always make me shiver
Reflections of that is far way
For I'm at a new school to this very day
My status is almost towards popularity
And let me tell you, I've got clarity!
Beauty is what I, a girl, do see
In this mirror standing before me
But don't worry I'm not so vain
And let me tell you, if I were
There'd be people calling a pain
Ah.
I sigh to myself, shaking my head
These reflections are almost good as dead
I can't believe now that I'm so different.
Ir's all in the past.
A contest entry
- Reflections by Folklor.
461 points, ended May 29, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
'I wish everyone I had known could see it
So they would never act so cold
Popularity is well below my figure'
this verse as fantastic. very well written you have a small typo on the last line 'ir's' should be it's lol but dont worry that desnt matter.
this was a little clichebut here was a great message behind this piece and i loved it well done.
-
This was really interesting..
I kind of liked it..lol. the flow
for me was a little off in places, but thats just me..You did a good job.. Best of luck..
Angel
Adding your comment:
