Standing all alone
Helpless
Hurting
Why does it have to be
Alone
Desolate
Trying to find my way
Wandering
Seeking
To get above the pain
Forgiving
Healing
Why can't I forget
Reeling
Spinning
When will it ever end
Someday
This day
Life, it can go on
For you
Yes, me
Hope will bring me through
Forever
Always
Reaching out my hand
Grasping
Grabbing
A new day is dawning
Praying
Believing
And that day is now. . .
Author notes
It is difficult to be positive and look to the future when you can't look at the present. BUT we need to look to that future to get through that past and current trials.
A contest entry
- Surviving..... by Lil-Bit Crazy.
900 points, ended May 22, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It is hard to be positive and see a brighter future when you feel like you are hopeless today and you just stagnate where you are. If you don't feel alittle hope for tomorrow it's hard to want to reach for that future.
Good job and my favorite part:
"A new day is dawning
Praying
Believing
And that day is now..."
Nice ending filled with hope!!
Congrats on the honorable
darlintlc
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I really like your poetry. The way the stanzas were written was brilliant, and the message of hope was inspiring. Thank You for the read.
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easier said then done... great write of hope thanks for entering and sharing this with us... good luck in contest.
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