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The next generation!

Tom lived next door to Mary and they rarely played apart
They were really rather naughty and they had been from the start
When both of them were fives years old, they dug up worms for fun
And Mary's Mum was horrified with Worm and Current bun
The high jinks were continued when they had the time at school
Tom's teacher walked round half the day, his back was labelled "FOOL"
Mary used to tickle Tom until he wet his pants
And Tom would then retaliate and fill her hair with ants
The giggling pair would hurry home to torture Mum and Dad
A house not filled with screams and yells left Tom and Mary sad

When both of them we ten or so, they played all day on bikes
For miles around the pair were known as dreadful little tykes
Knock down ginger, water bombs, and chasing dogs and cats
No-one was safe from catapults, or finding they'd four flats
The other children gazed in awe our heroes were the kings
Without a doubt the dreadful pair weren't earning angel's wings
Police were called each month or so and pocket money stopped
But Tom and Mary never quit and punishments all flopped
Grounding them had no effect, their windows were like doors
They didn't mind their bottoms smacked and made a game of chores

Everything then changed one day, when Mary's legs grew long
The two of them still played their games, another sort of wrong
Now Mary pushes Pete around, while Pete has plans in store
At Tom and Mary's brand new house, a girl's moved in next door!

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  • Recluse Writer gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    GRINNING

    Absolutely adored this one...what can I say except thanks for the facial muscle workout
    Best wishes but I think you may have it snagged

    Linda


  • Kathryn Bowden
    May 25, 2008

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    what a great story! I love a poem that tells a wonderful tale, especially one with such great rhythm and rhyme! Good luck!
    Kathryn


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    May 23, 2008

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    Kids will be kids so they say I enjoyed your write very much and I wish you the best of luck in this contest


  • Legend silver member
    May 23, 2008

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    What goes around comes around Great Little tale and one i am sure has further to run Wonderful piece Good luck in the contest


  • moonbumps silver member
    May 23, 2008

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    This was a pleasure to read-great story line and brought a wide smile - Lane will love this!
    xxx double


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    Well done sweetheart on this story..Of course I can finish by telling you what happened when the girls moved in next door..but not for all to know Loved it. Good luck honey.

    Love you
    Tory

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