Hush.
I don't deserve you.
You're way too good for me.
Hush.
You don't see it.
I'm so bad for you.
Hush.
Listen to my heart.
Oh, it's still beating.
Hush.
You think I'm innocent?
Let me show you.
Hush.
You're wrong.
I'm bad, so bad.
Hush.
Suit yourself.
I'm not walking away.
Hush.
Alright, here we go.
No turning back.
Hush.
Now, speak.
Tell me you love me.
Hush.
And I'll say it back.
Author notes
I wrote thisfor my boyfriend who I love very much. He really like it.
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Comments
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i really liken it too. i love the way you repeat the word hush. it's like the poem was written in a whisper. you might want to consider adding a few breaks before the word hush to add emphasis. just a suggestion.
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