Walk with me in the garden and feel the summer breeze
A gentle scent will tickle and make you want to sneeze
The sun will kiss your eyelids and dry your eyes to see
Your dear friend as she sit's there to talk to you and me.
She'll tell you of a new land where everything is calm
She lives there in abundance, at last she's free from harm
Where everyone is loving and nothing can go wrong
A place of peace and comfort where she can now belong.
Forget about the sadness that came to you that day
The time is for rejoicing, although she's gone away
Whenever you feel lonely, just come and sit with her
For this is Heaven's garden, you'll always find her there.
A contest entry
- Funeral For A Friend by movedon.
600 points, ended May 22, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very lovely
ros tis is so beautiful just as is all your writing nice to read more of your work god bless have a great day
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help me find love in heavens garden please, excellent dear poet xx good luck
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good
Flows nicely. Good rhythm. Good rhyme except for the last two lines--the rhyme is jarring and detracts from the poem. I like the sentiments expressed.
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I cannot wait to be re united with my lovely Danielle. Thank you
Mylee -
love its flow it really inspires me
i wanna right a new poem now *goes hides in hole to write* -
Wonderful! Very nice flow
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A wonderful theme since the lines written here gave me this sweet serenity within me
The flow was perfect and all in all, this was a lovely piece, all right!
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As always
A soft, light and sweet piece of poetry. I always come away with a smile after the read for the visions you paint are so peaceful and pretty
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Just Beautiful!!!
So beautifully writen...it made me shiver!
Soo fluent and calm and heartfelt!
Beautiful, just beautiful!
Blessed Be, witchy.
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