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Temptation


A young man - much in love - in the park,
heard his girl make a tempting remark: 
"Can I show you the place
were my surg’ry took place?"
Guiding him to the ward, in the dark.



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  • PatheticKt
    May 22

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    I don't know but I find this write mind boggling since this great piece seems to have a double meaning O.O
    Good write, indeed! Very interesting for just five lines ^^