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Sweet Tasting

gather in a cluster
we all resemble the next
with our outer appearance

juicier than
all the others
just one taste to see

you pull me away
from the rest

a knife to peel
my clothing down
leaving me exposed

to your waiting lips
my juices flow
as your teeth takes
that very first bite

you smile as you toss
the core of me away

such the sweet taste
of a grape in your mouth

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The topic...(not a prompt)
Sensuality!

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  • Rift my dear...this is a tease!!!
    Sensual is not even going to describe this. Panting with anticipation would be more like it. Hmmpphhh- I will be waiting for the next verse! LOL

    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm

  • penman gold member
    May 23
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    Wonderful

    What a great expression for the contest theme. Oh so sensuous too. Best of luck in the contest.

  • oh come on whatcha hiding by "claiming" the write about a grape we all know you are the purple or is it red temptation being tasted My oh my sweet as a ripe grape are you?