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the day still stings

i felt like my heart had stopped

i had no pulse

the phone hit the table

and i hit the floor

i wanted to scream but i had no air

i had forgotten how to breathe

finally a shrill which turned into a glass breaking scream

brusing my arms and my hands i was hitting anything

i could reach

the phone went flying

i stopped

i crawled with the little energy i had left

i pushed the only numbers i could dial

through my blurry wet eyes

"hes gone. he... he... just died. in his sleep. how could he just... why.... hes gone mom hes gone hes gone hes gone...:

my mother in a panick

my lungs forgetting how to work again

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