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Eternity's Kiss





 

Taste the sweetness of my lips,
devoured with treasure~
seek only the temptation
hidden upon ecstasy's longing.

The bitter irony,
laced within savored tongue~

I am your poison...
you, the cure.

Eternity awaits;
with but a simple kiss~
to die in your arms forevermore.

Author notes

Prompt: "Take this bottle with me
in the last gulp you kiss me."
StormGoddess

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  • spiritualangel
    June 5

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    Taste the sweetness of my lips,
    devoured with treasure~
    seek only the temptation
    hidden upon ecstasy's longing.

    Beautiful. Best of Luck.

  • Rovingone gold member
    June 1
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    Yum. So delicious. It's almost sinful. I love the line bitter irony, laced with savored tongue.


  • only1love4ever
    May 23

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    Gorgeous

    This is a gorgeous poem. It is so glamarous! I love your scripture also. The words and the way you describe the poem is so lovely. I am your poison...
    you, the cure. This is my favorite line. It is lovely how you just put the whole thing together.

    Thank you for sharing this with me.
    It is an amazing contribution to AP.
    I am overjoyed to have read this.
    God Bless.
    Have a great day.
    Good luck in your contest.
    You are sure to win!
    ~Only1love4ever

  • Rovingone gold member
    May 22

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    Oh, wow,is it getting hot in here!  That one gives you goose flesh just thinking about it. You certainly can describe a kiss. (must be a good kisser. lol)

    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      May 22
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      LOL, thank you. And, well... it isn't I judging!
      Appreciate the comments.

      Storm
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