I want to take you on a journey
on a journey though my mind
you can open any door
and stay a little time
I’ll show you all my feelings
and where I keep my smile
I’ll let you in on what i’m thinking
you can pause and read my files
there is a door on an upper floor
that’s under lock and key
it hold my rage my anger
you shouldn’t set them free
there’s a door around the corner
you can open if you dare
I think it’s kind of special
I keep all my dreams in there
So, if you like what I have inside me
and you have a little time
I’d to take on a journey
A journey though my mind
Comments
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2nd stanza-2nd line; Capitalilize the I in I'm.
This so clever! I love all of the metaphors that you used to create this. This is my favorite of all your poems. It's very well done and it made me smile. Fantastic write!!!!!!!!
Myle -
great
loved it
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