If there was no 'genuine' article,
there would be no kind of fakes.
This stands to prove for sure, I say
that love exists, for goodness sakes.
Too many attempts means there's something
worth shooting for, thence the stars.
I'd bet my last golden tooth and much more
that true love exists and not just on Mars.
Author notes
Make me believe in love.
A contest entry
- Where Is The Love? by Little Lottie.
750 points, ended June 1, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Overlook made up words
Comments
-
a good penning posted with smiles, true love does exist, i have been in its realms, sadly i am not there anymore but i have in my heart the time when i was laughing in and dancing in the domains of beautiful love. now i am just a sad wino lol
-
Some of the rhyme seemed to be slightly forced, but apart from that this is nice. It's simple and to the point, which is good.
-
-
Yes, you are perhaps right lol sometimes this happens with rookies - but thanks for the review
-
Adding your comment:
