In the end it was fate
For I knew it would not work
Was reluctant to blind date
In the end it was fate
Evermore you're my sweet mate
Glad I agreed, was not a jerk
In the end it was fate
For I knew it would not work
In a list
A contest entry
- In The End It Was...... by thegoldenpath.
500 points, ended May 24, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fate by Roseamongweeds.
520 points, ended October 24, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Shape of Things to Come by Child of Water.
1590 points, ended November 29, 13 entries
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Comments
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Wow. powerful, short and sweet. Great job, Good luck.
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Fate works mysteries that for a small glimpse what cost more than all the gold and silver in the universe.
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Thats real good...I like the use of repitition....but you put a y instead of a t in it.....In the end iy was fate....
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A simple write this is and I might as well try this form one day (Is it somewhat related to Septolet? Hmm . . .)
Fate, I wish I could take a glimpse of it before knowing its presence or something 0.o
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