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The secret about my Mother

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Elizabeth is a prisoner --

a crying mother
and a forgotten child
of a syncophated society.













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She will still be loved by me and my brother.

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  • sassykitty
    June 8, 2008

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    Deceptively simple yet how moving is this? The feelings literally pour out in so few words, wow! Thanks for sharing such a heartfelt and searing write.

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    really like the simplicity in this.


  • Nicolette gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    How beautiful this is... it speaks of understanding and a deep sense of belonging. Yes, a woman, a mother, a child..always.

    This one touched me, Hensley.

    ~ Nicolette