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Breathless

You left me breathless
With the reassuring smile

That accompanied the lie
from your eyes

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    i like this Ashley


  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    a sad thought here.


  • PatheticKt
    May 22, 2008

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    Simple and quite lovely
    Who knew that sometimes, someone you talk to might be in this facade kind of fashion *sigh*