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Two Souls Intertwine (Collab w. poeticweaver)

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Tenderness fills my once empty tea pot
now I whistle with blissful lullabies.
I hear songs you sing that we love a lot,
and my every breathe exhales a sigh.

You are the sun that shines upon me
the truth of a pure heart of gold I know.
Our meeting is forever destiny,
reading across pages our first hello.

Within moments I get lost in your eyes,
longing to be captured in your embrace.
Your fingers tenderly silence my cries,
as your soft lips kiss the tears from my face.

Soft words captivating the souls of two,
Releasing now, words of truth, "I love you."

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Oh blessed soul it was a ultimate pleasure to once again, pen with you. Thanks so much for being a light in my dark shadows.

A wonderful man full of love and compassion a must read for sure: http://allpoetry.com/poeticweaver

I love you.

Passionspromise

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  • Lady Altheia
    May 23

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    You two have been busy penning beautiful poetry. I liked this and I wish for this type of relationship in which you penned.
  • Tegram
    May 22
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    nice poem

  • Nature Song silver member
    May 22

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    Passionate tender words of love, two souls a blending of two hearts! Nice boder as well. ~Sie


  • Griswold
    May 22

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    Nicely and lovingly written again you two an excellent blending of thoughts, love and words. Love you Tory...Scott

    . Rewarded 4


  • cricketjeff gold member
    May 22
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    you two always bring out the best in each other, great stuff.

  • JWGoethe
    May 22

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    "you are the sun that shines upon me"--what a great line. Very passionate poem. A fine collaboration to be proud of. Speaks with gentle beauty to the very heart and soul of true love.

  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 21

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    I Enjoy Your Poetic Kiss In Your Lines Divine.

    Such a joy to pen with a loving soul such as you.
    You are such a light as well, you are one tough cookie.
    I'm so glad we found the time to pen yet another beauty.

    Much love, light, and peace~
    I love ya lots, Timothy


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      May 21

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      I try to be a tough cookie but it seems its never good enough. You make it feel alot less burdened when you pen these sweet pieces. You yourself, is a rare gem, and i am glad i have you in my treasure chest. Thanks so much for lifting me. I love ya lots too.

      Tory
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