You are all that and a hell of a lot more.
I got a good deal, when I walked in your store.
You being the perfect host, at all times, so swell.
I got lost in our first kiss, now here to tell the tale.
I couldn't ask for a grander, more appealing deal.
This is the end result of a wish so richly fulfilled.
What can I say, you're the cream of the crop, in spades.
And, to wrap it; you flutter my thoughts with intensities.
I am enthralled and just totally pleased.
That you turned out to be fun and a handsome tease.
Now my sky is looking like it might explode in all blue.
And, I owe everything, this blissful kiss, to the likes of you.
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A contest entry
- In The End It Was...... by thegoldenpath.
500 points, ended May 24, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Overlook made up words
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Well even though I'm the emo type it's always good to hear a love that actually didn't suck. I glad for you and thank you entering this uplifting poem.
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hahaha this is all fantasy hahaha one day, however, who knows? lol
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Thanks, Ian lol
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