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From Angels Eyes

They come to me

Unspoken yet loud

 

 

Pull their clothes up

Braces and bibs

 

 

Then the noose tightens

And the color fades

 

 

Yesterdays children

Walking the steps

 

Of tomorrows day fathers

 

 

 

 

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  • Tattboyspet
    May 22

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    good grief! very powerful write here, but I'm battling to see how the prompt inspired this
    lol - I always ask my favourites to give me a hint in their AN if it's completely abstract
    thank you for your entry