The stalker was leering
My anger was burning
My heart frozen cold
Then, a flash-flood of tears
I drowned in a bucket of
Hot muddy teardrops
For the shivering flames
Of my feelings he burnt
The torch of a welder
Became my hero
He Hosed down the flavors
Of snow and sunshine
He turned on the monster
That melted inside me
And I barely escaped the
Iceberg from hell.
A contest entry
- Say Goodbye to Blue Rew with gifts of FIRE~~~WATER by Blue Rew.
4650 points, ended June 6, 2008, 13 entries
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what do you think?
Comments
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This one is crisp and furious in its display
of contradictions. Thank-you for this farewell,
thank-you for entering. Blue
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This is pretty good. I like how you wrote this. Keep up your amazing work!!!
CrimsonViper
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crimson, thanks.
Thank-you for reading, commenting on my poems. I like your write's too. How do I put you on my favs. list?
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