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Battlefield of Dreams

The battlefield darkens, the sun no longer Shining.
All around me life and death binding.
Should I Turn back, Could I turn back?
No i can never turn back.
I am here on this field for i have followed my dreams.
Turn around, turn my back on what I reach for.
This is my finest hour, My chance to show all.
Follow what i want, never to be forgetten or poor.
When i reach it then i will never fall.
For there is no failing when you follow what you believe in.
For now I can ride home with honor,
or ride to the pearl gates proud of my end.

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  • Saya Yakimo
    May 22, 2008
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    wow its good i like it its my kind of work


  • PatheticKt
    May 22, 2008

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    Huh.
    This is a simple write but the theme here is quite powerful
    I hope you didn't think 'Huh.' was only going to be my comment ^^'
    Anyway, nice write; it made me think n.n