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My Big Brother

My big brother and I never quite saw eye to eye.
Sometimes he would make me laugh.
Sometimes he would make me cry.
My big brother and I, would always fight, like brothers and sisters do.
Sometimes, I swear, I could have ripped him in two.
But no matter what, we will always have eachother.
I know I will always love him, because he is, and always will be...
My big brother

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I wrote this poem for my brother on his birthday because I couldnt afford to buy him anything so I figured something from the heart was better then anything that I could buy him

just wanted to know what you think

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  • mrs. random silver member
    May 22

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    I have 12 brothers and boy do I know this feeling! i love all my brothers so dearly and this made me want to hug them forever! well done

    Mylee

  • PatheticKt
    May 22

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    Aww, I've always wanted a big brother but I'm the oldest (figures 0.o)
    Anyway, you're lucky to have a big brother and I'm sure he would like this poem since it was simply pulled out with care from the heart