Sadness is
the lack of faith
to believe
the wonderful
beautiful
moments
will happen
again
A contest entry
- 15 words by Melissa Gayle.
600 points, ended May 22, 2008, 32 entries
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This is a good entry for 15 words and I live it everyday. Some days are different than others but generally the concept is resident in my spirit all the time. RC
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great
I really liked it...I seem to be sad a lot and I dont believe in hardly anything; never have I guess...but it never even came to thought that my lack of faith could be because of my sadness...this is great I like it alot thank you for sharing it.
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I didn't like the repetition of 'the' -
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Thanks for your critique, I made it better, taking your advice.
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"Maybe" you have a richer, more buoyant "undercurrent" in your "bass" instincts than I do. Cryptic no less!
Marlene -
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You are a hoot!
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I'm usually called other things!
Marlene
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Beautiful- So much expressed in so few words. Great job.
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