Peeking pixies come
from miles far and wide
to peer into the window
of my soul searching
for my thoughts.
Author notes
Visual Prompt: Fairies Looking Through A Gothic Arch
by artist John Anster Fitzerald
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A contest entry
- Peeking Pixies - Visual Prompt 20/20 by Gypsie Ink.
425 points, ended May 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Delightful!
Nosy little creatures...lol Wonderful write!
Thank you for your entry and Best of luck in the contest! -
Beautiful take on the prompt! The thought itself was fabulously simple and you have managed to reatain that simplicity with your words. Wonderful!
The poem expresses the image beautifully!
Best of luck with the contest! God Bless!
Anansey -
You put into so few words a beautiful take on the picture. Anymore would have taken away the simplistic flow I got from reading it.
Thank you for sharing it with us all sis. Well done. -
This is a beautiful picture, and a simplistic and elegant poem to grace it. The only thinkg I can think to say is that I may have elaborated on the finer details of the ghostly pixies, and the ominous background. However, there is beauty and simplicity, and I think you hit a lot of the right notes, and you have a lot of delicate elegance. All in all, it was a very enjoyable read, and you did an extremely good job. ^_
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Beautiful and well concieved. A fairy tale quality that was a joy to read. Speaks volumes in just a few words.
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