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My Love Affair with Mr. Hughes

Last night I took a lovely stroll
      down the lanes of an historian museum
I got to search and stare at every corner
      and every place that laid between the lines of love
The way his chocolate covered pecan skin
      covers all the inches of his mouth filled with words
      That dictionaries haven't dared to think of yet


That's right


This was a cat who knew how to eradicate his victims...
        his words would cut like razor blade knives
But last night his language spoke of passion
        wrapped in lyrical rhythm and blues
In which he liked to call "The Weary Blues"
        just another reason why we love to sing to a melancholy tune
   

Bluesy jazz is what he called it


He said it was the black man's calling
        his depression and his repression
But all I knew that I rather be a sitting duck
        and listen to his stream of lyrical wordplay
Wrap around every corner of my carmel filled passion
        and wonder why I could never uncover such words
       

that make simplicity a bitch

       

Author notes

Langston Hughes is my favorite poet....probably of all time and I wanted to give him this fittening tribute. My love affair with Hughes started long ago. I was only 10 when I read his first poem....and it was love at first sight

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  • Deathless1
    September 26, 2008

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    great write, i had to check him out after reading this and he is pretty damn good.
    great write, and i love the fact you are giving credit to the ones who deserve it.

    KNIGHT TIME


  • secberm
    July 17, 2008

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    Wow... Well, Langston was the man. I like lots lil sis. No smart remarks here. Well done. One.

    Dez


  • mozarts funeral gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    Omg I would have married Langston. I thought he was soooo hot and he had such a mind. You're a beautiful poet!!!! I'm glad I'm not the only one who felt this way. I would hold poetry readings in college and I'd just read him until my jaw was sore!!!!

  • AndTheGuitarWeeps
    July 13, 2008
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    freken beautiful babe you got some serious talent cant wait for your next one


  • Juicy904
    July 3, 2008
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    this is a wonderful piece of work. its what you call ashtonoshing.


  • BlackSwan
    June 19, 2008
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    Bianca this is amazing! I love the descriptive imagery!


  • ScottishPrincess silver member
    June 16, 2008
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    Sis this is outstanding indeed!,you know I think he would love this and this is just beautiful

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