Downward spirals in progress -
suppressed to sew a smile someday
that scattered stains upon the street.
Depressed,
your feet lay still in traps,
you trip -
your face distorts
the floor.
Author notes
Count: 30 words.
A contest entry
- 30 words by Melissa Gayle.
400 points, ended May 22, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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That's some fall you describe!
Congratulations on the HM.
Marlene -
love that the face distorts the floor, really cool image.
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wow... slow down! i can barely keep up with all these new poems
but again you manage to express such raw and powerful emotion in so few words... wish i could do that lol
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lol, I was on a roll even though it was 3 am or so
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