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standing ground

what is wrong
and what is right
my heart could never decide

only to leave thoughts of you
that trailed my mind threw and threw

over and over again
I thought it out
but can never single one thing
the question that keeps dragging on in me

what is the right thing to do?
but either way
I can only blame you

for what you did
there’s no way out
because the truth
will out

I can never escape
from your mistakes
because I have so much to say

sorry doesn’t mean enough
because this wasn’t the first time
that you struck

so be prepared to stand your ground
cause no matter what you’ll gonna fall down



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  • Breathless Ballons
    May 22, 2008
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    wow.. this was great, and also very powerful.

    I love it!


  • penman gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very gripping and so well done. A terrific creation. Best of luck in the contest.


  • VerminVomit
    May 21, 2008
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    i love the lat 2 lines