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Breathe...

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I feel that I can breathe no more
For you are taking over me
A tourniquet of solitude
A place at last to lose control
Haunted by a thoughtless life
Alone am I, the snow white queen
An imaginary whisper so close at hand
The sweet sacrifice of your lies
Not just everybody’s fool again
As I breathe in my last breath
I slip farther and farther away
And wonder if you are missing me
Or if you are living on cloud nine
Within your lithium induced coma
That could not bring me to life
But could lead me to death!

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Evanescence is the group, and the titles are in italic.
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http://mountcope.files.wordpress.com/2007/11/breathe.jpg

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  • docellis124
    June 7, 2008
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    Yo, Deb,

    You really know your band...I love the way you put this together.

    docellis12