Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

the lion

the lion our rightousness
god of angels
whose flame transfixes the gaze of armies
returns on a cloud of glory
with a robe dipped in blood
his tears are our box of mourning
his words eco through the toungh of history
emptying our sorrows into the sap of his vigilance
as he bore the weight of the world
that we may eat his flesh
and drink his blood
his gift from above the heavens
held deep within
carrying his life through the ages
unto death
and into eternal glory.
amen

unfinished

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • snookrn
    July 11, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    power and control

    i see a man with the life of the lion, strong and powerful.  a life that is full of trials and he still is triumphant. I feel the pain of his life and the trials he has BUT in the end he has eternal glory if he follows the path of goodness