Ecliptic

Moonlight kissed heavy eyes
red Sun brightened
Skies into spheres
Love
was in good morning.

A contest entry

15 words by Melissa Gayle. 600 points, ended May 22, 2008, 32 entries
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Mari Goes
May 22, 2008
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Lovely verse!

Mari
- Peteskid
  June 6, 2008
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  Always more to say but fifteen well chosen words can say a lot...thanks for your wonderful comment...h
Melissa Gayle
May 22, 2008
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Love is good all day long, isn't it.
- Peteskid
  June 6, 2008
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  Thanks Melissa-
  for your commnets and the contest...fifteen is a challenge!...PK
Sprite
May 21, 2008

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This has a dreamy quality that is appealing. It reminds me of the cycle of life, the roundness of being that I am found of referring to. Lovely. Good luck! ~ Jjoyce
- Peteskid
  June 6, 2008
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  Thank you joyce-
  I agree life has cycles and we can learn from so much around us in nature...thank you so much...PK