When you walk the foot steps of a friend you might learn things you never knew about them
High above the thoughts of boys you'll never want to stop the noise.Friends are true to me & you.
When you wander places of the mind you'll sometimes fell as if you were left behind. No matter what all friends are ther untill the end
was it good?Is there anything i need to change?did you like it?
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Beautiful thoughts ...
It is true. Friends are not only until the end, they are also beyond. Thank you for reminding me of this. How easily we forget the simple things. And often they are the most important.
Typo's: Until; feel (third line); they're (exit line).
Thank you, Friend.
Love
Myra
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you are deep in the emotions of friendships, they will change at your age. i like this poem for its maturity of thought, there are grammar errors , you may look at . fell should read feel. keep writing ., please very enjoyable ..peter
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