Restless nights left to ponder,
could true love last the test of time?
Or am I left here holding vigil,
while lightning bugs strike,
and moon-beams consume my open heart.
A contest entry
- 10/30/20 by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 21, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful my friend, your work has a way of pulling on the heart strings and this work is no different. It is a truly pure and lovely piece.
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Lightning bugs is cool!!! Aww... such a sad and wistful take on the pic! Just wonderful!
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Excellent
You are right we did both write similar poems. best of luck
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Beautiful images...well done and good luck
Simon
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A delicately sweet and beautifully penned piece! well done and best of luck!!
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Excellent while she ponders I like that
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OHHHHHH!!!! I love lightening bugs and I love the thought that they are helping you hold vigil....This was so sweet and delightful to the senses...Best wishes!!
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