Running to the my car
rain softly coming down.
Thinking of a million things
all going though my head
traffic was bogging me down.
Wipers were mesmerizing.
While they gently sway
like the waves at the seashore.
Calming my nerves…
Author notes
Prompt Rain
A contest entry
- PIF - three of my favorite things by tara wilson.
1200 points, ended May 22, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a nice simile here....I really hear both sounds in this..
and feel that sway..this is soothing, thanks so much for entering my contest
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Gentle rain has that calming effect...well expressed...All the best in the contest!
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beautiful gran
i love you
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