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I Can't Hear You

Individual violence can always be explained
By the individual or someone else
With knowledge on the process of rage
The injured cannot hear their explanations
Through their ruptured, bleeding ears


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  • secberm
    May 27, 2008
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    We beat our rugs to clear them of dusts that settled in. Those deep rooted dirt bandits that refuse to be swept away or sucked into the pits of Hoover's belly. Sometimes, we must beat a little sense into those too dense to realize that patience is long expired. LOL (Why am I thinking of that Verizon commercial?) Write on. One.

    Dez

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    well said.