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Children Below

Golden glory -
Life's story.
Watching lives below,
Eyes slowly glow -
Smiling gently -
To children here below.

Blue drops fall -
Suffering all -
For children who hert -
Or turn their heart.

Sorrows and woes -
Praises and joys -
Celebrations and exultations -
He watches all.

Love infiinte -
Love kind,
The king watches his children -
Suffering and exulting -
Golden glory, Life's storry -
Watching us below.

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"Praise God from whom all blessings flow,
Praise Him all creatures here below,
Praise him above ye heavenly hosts,
Praise Father, Son, and Holy Ghost."

- The Doxology

Author notes

This poem was written when I was thinking about the Doxology, which I really like quite a bit... as odd as that may seem... But thi is the first religious poem I have written in a while... But what do you think.

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