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alcoholic shockwaves



tremors of sorrow traced
to beer-bottle-epicenters;

conscience covered in chipped
stain-glass memories









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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    Really interesting, at first I wasn't sure if the two thoughts were cohesive but reading again I can see they do go together.


  • sheltered
    May 21, 2008
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    I had a Richter scale six weekend so I can relate.