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a real tear.

a real tear
slides down
my cheek.
(not just some
diluted illusion.)
all I wanted
was some time
to myself
to recover from
the day’s daily attack
on my heart
& even that is
too much to ask for.

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  • A-Sky-Lark
    May 22, 2008
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    mm, school's almost over..
    cheer up, i love you
    -gives you a cookie-