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Glimmer of Hope

Darkness consumes me .
A Light is found.
I arise to see another day.

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    A hopeful piece here.


  • aeolia
    May 21, 2008

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    The phrase "glimmer of hope" is fairly cliche, as is the poem. Personally, I think the passive construction in the second line weakens an already weak poem, but that's just me.