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Mmm a little morsel
Stored up just for me
I’ve been watching close
For the moment it is free

The only problem now
Are these other two
Who seem just as intent
To intercept my food

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  • daviscth silver member
    May 23, 2008

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    LOL. Thanks for posting this. I like your take on the picture. Poor thing must feel like a -----well you know--- a cornered mouse.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 21, 2008
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    Very Very cute and a great take on the prompt!!
    Well Done & Good Luck in the contest!!


  • Aerden gold member
    May 21, 2008
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    *giggles!* It seems so...Emily Dickinsonesque. (g)


  • Nephalaneous lover
    May 21, 2008

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    amazing...so cute and frightning for the mouse...great write

    NL