The only thing you left,
When you went out to sea.
Was your heart.
In a cage.
Without any key.
Author notes
I kinda tried to make it seem like she was all sad that he tried to leave something for her without really any effort.
katrina this is KT!!!
A contest entry
- Another Quickie! by liduen.
375 points, ended May 22, 2008, 9 entries
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Should I expand the end?
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nice, although it does kreep me out a little. anything you haven't been telling us? Anything?
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KT! YOU ENTERED! YEAH!!! I agree with Perception, this reminds me of the POTC movies Great, emotional write: good job and good luck in my contest!
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sank u katrinaaa!!!
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Hm... It kinda reminds me of those Pirate movies... for some reason
Nice write though... Very thoughtful, emotional... and deep 
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thx 4 the comment!
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